narritive writing week 9!

kia ora everyone! ke te pehea koe? today you will see my writing it's not done but it will be done in a matter of time. anei tenei! (traslation: here it is!)

The staircase to the world of the rainbow kitty’s. 

Hi, I'm Demon the cat. yes , I’m fat. But it’s my fur, not me. This story is about me so let's get started. One day I was walking with my uncle Piky. Then suddenly Piky was called by Debbie, our owner, it was his lunchtime. I have a later lunch. I kept walking. I decided to go to the beach. By the time I got there the beach had become sandy and windblown. Then uncle Piky came yowling for me. He said that “ Dominic will be home soon. So I think you should come home too. What do you say, hey?” “NO NO NO!”, I yowled back at him “ I don’t want to go home! If Sophie was coming I would, but it’s not even WEDNESDAY IS IT?!” He just sighed and walked back home.

Then so suddenly, out of the corner of my eye, I saw a staircase leading up into the clouds. What was it? I climbed the hill and found what I saw out of the corner of my eye. A staircase with flowers as amazing as a kitten being born. I climbed it to find … 1 billion rainbows and 100,000 rainbow kitty’s. Then my long lost friend Staffy appeared from the staircase “STAFFY!” I called out. “DEMON!” Staffy called out “why are you here?” “I climbed the flower staircase” I said “ Me too!” Staffy said and then BOSH a rainbow kitty flew into me! “HEY!” I said WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING!”  “YOU WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING!” Said the rainbow kitty “IT’S NOT POLITE TO… Demon?” ...

That's all that i have written and i hope you like it.

By Soph

   

narritive week eight. The Demon of the grave

 Hey everyone! How are you? I hope your ready to hear my narrative "The Demon of the grave"! But make sure not to get to scared because it is a bit scary!  let the story begin.   

 The demon of the grave.

 

Carlos was driving, Emily was in the front of the car and screamed with happiness. She was having the most spectacular time with her friends, Carlos and Devon. Devon was clinging to the back of the little kiddie car. He was singing “I believe I can fly.I believe I can touch the sky!” The Car zoomed like the wind but then the car suddenly stopped and Emily and Devon flew off … and … landed on the car again! The car zoomed and never stopped. Emily screamed. She wanted to get off now. And suddenly a car stopped in front of them and they crashed BANG! SCREECH! Emily got her head hit on the road … she wasn’t breathing. Her head was bleeding so much and Carlos rang the hospital. In just a minute the people came and one boy (who was her brother) came over and did CPR. but it was too late. She was gone. Carlos and Devon were so sad that they brought a beautiful funeral in her honor. Her mother, father, Carlos, Devon and Emily's brother all came. And then it happened. The tombstone shook. A Demon who looked like Emily appeared before them. Her eyelids were closed. They opened to show white eyes. Carlos said “ Emily! Your back! We thought you were-” Emily cut him off. She said in a dark demonic voice “ Emily is no more! Because of you, Carlos, I am now … THE DEMON OF THE GRAVE!” “no” said Carlos It … It's not true!” “yes it is” ,she said in her new demonic voice “ It is true! YOU were going too fast! YOU didn’t listen when I told you to slow down!” her  dress was covered in blood. Her dress was covered in blood. EMILY WAS NO MORE!  “Because of YOU!” Emily said again, “Because of YOU I am dead! EVERYTHING IS BECAUSE OF YOU!” she disappeared. Only to be seen by Carlos. Legend has it that you could somon Emily with just a candle and an old chant that goes like this “ “EMILY, EMILY. COME TO ME!”  10 times and She would come. But it will only work if it is 3:00 am. 

The end

Friends

Hello people. Today I'm showing you my Friend Presentation. I hope you like it because It took me AGES to finish and I'm now done. In the slideshow there is lots of video's and stuff about friends!don't be scared to comment, bye!