here it is!!!!!free writing story
mermaids
mermaids are beautiful and elusive creatures, sometimes seen glimpsed lounging on coastal rocks or swimming through the ocean waves. the earliest stories of these semi-human sea creatures came from 7000 years ago. they can also spell disaster for those meriners who see them. whenever they appear, storms, shipwrecks and drownings follow close behind. mermaids, for example, temt ships onto rock by bewitching the sailors with their great beauty and haunting songs.
WOW Soph.Great story.You have used some very interesting describing words.
ReplyDeleteI thought seeing a mermaid was a good thing.I guess not if a ship wreck happens after seeing one.
Just remember to use full stops and capital letters.It will make your work easier to read.
Have a super week.
thank you for your comment thank you for reminiding me about full stops and capital letters. i guess i have always wanted to be a mermaid but when i learned this i said to myself" no way i'm going to be a mermaid thanks soph
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