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Friday, September 11, 2020

narritive week eight. The Demon of the grave

 Hey everyone! How are you? I hope your ready to hear my narrative "The Demon of the grave"! But make sure not to get to scared because it is a bit scary!  let the story begin.   



 The demon of the grave.

 


Carlos was driving, Emily was in the front of the car and screamed with happiness. She was having the most spectacular time with her friends, Carlos and Devon. Devon was clinging to the back of the little kiddie car. He was singing “I believe I can fly.I believe I can touch the sky!” The Car zoomed like the wind but then the car suddenly stopped and Emily and Devon flew off … and … landed on the car again! The car zoomed and never stopped. Emily screamed. She wanted to get off now. And suddenly a car stopped in front of them and they crashed BANG! SCREECH! Emily got her head hit on the road … she wasn’t breathing. Her head was bleeding so much and Carlos rang the hospital. In just a minute the people came and one boy (who was her brother) came over and did CPR. but it was too late. She was gone. Carlos and Devon were so sad that they brought a beautiful funeral in her honor. Her mother, father, Carlos, Devon and Emily's brother all came. And then it happened. The tombstone shook. A Demon who looked like Emily appeared before them. Her eyelids were closed. They opened to show white eyes. Carlos said “ Emily! Your back! We thought you were-” Emily cut him off. She said in a dark demonic voice “ Emily is no more! Because of you, Carlos, I am now … THE DEMON OF THE GRAVE!” “no” said Carlos It … It's not true!” “yes it is” ,she said in her new demonic voice “ It is true! YOU were going too fast! YOU didn’t listen when I told you to slow down!” her  dress was covered in blood. Her dress was covered in blood. EMILY WAS NO MORE!  “Because of YOU!” Emily said again, “Because of YOU I am dead! EVERYTHING IS BECAUSE OF YOU!” she disappeared. Only to be seen by Carlos. Legend has it that you could somon Emily with just a candle and an old chant that goes like this “ “EMILY, EMILY. COME TO ME!”  10 times and She would come. But it will only work if it is 3:00 am. 



The end


1 comment:

  1. Well I wasn't expecting your story to end as it did Soph.
    It started off quite happy and then it turned dark when Emily passed away.
    I was thinking that they were all on bumper cars and that it would end with them all going out for popcorn and candy floss.😊

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