Hey guys! Sophiah here! So today I'm gonna show you my Stranded (Cat/Liger Version). It's a really cool story! Okay so some news.. my baby brother Tydus is 8 MONTHS OLD! he is already crawling and talking! he says "mama" and "dada" and "yaya" and lots of other things! So anyway here is my story!
Stranded (Cat/liger version)
Chapter 1: the beginning
Katie awoke to find that she had floated to a GIANT ISLAND! She was freaking out until a strange voice caught her attention. She walked, while the sand got stuck between her furry paws. She was a liger and could not understand what happened for her to get stuck here, Yet even if she didn’t like it, she kept following the smell. As she found where the scent came from, She realized that it was just her friend Noi. “NOI!” she called out, “ Hey Noi! Are you alright? Noi looked up “Oh Katie! Thank goodness your alright! Yes I'm fine, but where’s your cub! ! “Noi! Ya silly goof. I Haven’t had my cub yet!” Katie exclaimed. “Oh right!” Replied Noi. They started to laugh. But after they laughed Katie froze. She remembered. Today was the day that her cub would be born. Luckily, Noi was a doctor from “Liger Hospital” in their city. “Okay now that’s done with” Katie painted as she held her newborn cub in her mouth. “What do we do now?” asked Noi. “we wait” Said katie
Chapter 2: the dragon
“It's been 7 months but it feels like forever!” Exclaimed noi. “Oh uncle noi!” Said Lois, Katie’s cub, “We'll be out soon” “How do you know Lois?” Noi asked “because I’ve called someone to help us!” exclaimed lois. Just then, Katie and Noi heard GIANT wings. As soon as they looked up at the sky, a HUMONGOUS DRAGON FLEW OVER THEM! “ OH MY GAWD!” Katie yelped. “Hey droga!” exclaimed Lois, “ how are ya?” “I’m feelin’ good little cub” Said the Dragon, “so this must be ya mama and ya uncle?” It Asked. “Yes!” Said Lois, “I called ya here to help us!” “So whatcha need, little cub?” The dragon asked. “For you to get us outta here!” “anything for a little cub and its mama and uncle!”. She put down her wing and they climbed on. “So where are we goin, little cub?” The dragon asked. “We need to get to the “Liger city”! Exclaimed Lois. After 19 hours and 25 minutes, they arrived at “liger City. “thank you so much droga!” said lois “Anytime, little cub”
Hey guys! did you like it? I hope you did!
It sounds like it won't be long before you and Tydus are having lots of fun together Soph.I have 3 wonderful brothers.@ are older than me and one younder.
ReplyDeleteWhat I really like about your story is all the punctuation you have used.You've included speech marks,full stops and even a couple of exclamation marks.Obviously the people saying them mean business.
Can you tell me what a liger is?.
Have a wonderful holiday.
thanks for the feedback Mrs Cassidy! well a Liger is a tiger and a lion hybrid and thats all i know :) -sophie/sophiah
DeleteHello Soph.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a wonderful holiday with your family and friends.
There's only one week left of the school holidays-have fun!
Hello Sophia.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a wonderful holiday.I can't wait to read about what you have been doing.
Talofa lava Soph,
ReplyDeleteI love reading your very imaginative stories. I like how this story has lots of dialogue. You have used the speech marks too to show this. Well done!
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you Whaea miki! I was feeling really good when i made this! I can't believe I hit 100 followers on tiktok! I'm so proud of myself!
DeleteKia ora Soph,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story I hope there is another story you can write I really enjoy reading them.My favourtie setentence paints a picture in my mind "While that sand got stuck between her furry paws".
Have a great day!